2024年中考英语作文押题专题15 书信邮件类之感谢信（原卷版+解析版）

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专题14 书信邮件类之感谢信(考情分析)感谢信是对收信人的某一行为表示感谢的信件，通常用于收到别人的邀请或受到别人的帮助时。感谢信的写作目的非常明确，只要把需要感谢的人和事写清楚就行。(写作方法指导)感谢信的写作，可以分以下三段进行：第一段，简述写信的目的，诚挚地表达谢意，第二段，表明感谢的原因，回顾对方所做的具体事情，第三段，再次向对方表示感谢并表达希望回报对方的愿望。(写作模板)Dear ，（称呼）①How is your life/study/work recently In this letter I would like to thank you for your .（原因）／I'm writing to express my heartfelt gratitude.②I am writing to you because .（所做的事）Thanks to your help,I Without your help,I couldn't .It's so kind of you to .③ Thank you again for what you have done. I hope to have the chance to express my thanks. I hope | can meet you sometime and express my thanks in person.(愿望）④All the best!Yours sincerely,（署名）注：①问候并表明写作意图②详细描写感谢的原因③再次表示感谢并抒发愿望④表达祝愿模板内容可根据题目要求和具体情况取舍。(常用表达)必备亮点词汇heartfelt adj.衷心的 gratitude n.感激 grateful adj.感谢的，感激的sincerely adv.真诚地 kindness n.善良 hospitality n.热情好客，款待express v.表达 do sb. a favor 帮忙 in person 亲自from the bottom of one's heart 从心底 from the bottom of one's heart ......经典套用句型闪亮篇首句How time flies!时间过得真快啊！I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude.我写信是想表达我衷心的感激之情。How is your stay in... 您在······待着感觉怎么样？I am writing to you because I want to tell you a piece of good news that....我给您写信是因为我想告诉您一则······的好消息。I am writing to you because I want to thank you for your hospitality.我给您写信是想表达一下对您热情周到的招待的感激之情。I'm writing to express my thanks for...我写这封信是为了表达我对······的谢意。I am writing to you because...因为······,我给您写这封信。I'm writing to thank you for your great help!我写信来谢谢你巨大的帮助！出彩篇中句Many thanks for your kind and warm help.多谢您善良热情的帮助。Thank you for your generous hospitality.多谢您的款待。Thanks to your help,I can get the prize.多亏了您的帮助，我才得到了这个奖。精彩篇尾句I hope I can express my thanks to you in person.我希望能够亲自向您表达谢意。I'm sincerely grateful for all your help.对于您的帮助，我真的非常感激。Thank you for your kindness to have done me a favour.对于您的善意的帮忙，我向您表示感谢。Many thanks for all the good things you have done in helping us to...非常感谢您为帮助我们······所做的一切。I am glad to hear that you will visit our school soon.听说您很快会来我们学校参观，我特别高兴。(中考真题精讲)（2021·湖北黄石·中考真题）As an old saying goes, “A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart.” 假如你叫李华，在你的初中学习生涯中，一定有许多朋友给了你不少帮助。在毕业之际，请给你的好友李雷写一封感谢信。要点：1. 感谢他（她）对你的帮助。2. 他（她）是如何帮助你的。要求：1. 请结合具体事例，适当发挥；语言通顺，意思连贯。2. 文中不能出现与本人相关信息。3. 80词左右（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）。Dear Li Lei,How time flies! We are going to graduate from junior high school. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wish you all the best!Yours,Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Li Lei,How time flies! We are going to graduate from junior high school.How is your study recently In this letter I would like to thank you for your help in the past three years .I'm writing to express my heartfelt gratitude.I am writing to you because you always helped me when I had difficulty learning during the three years of study . My study progress can’t be going smoothly without you.Especially in English,I make a so rapid progress ,your help and suggestion is of great value to me .It's so kind of you to accompany me through the junior middle school three years.Thank you again for what you have done. I hope to have the chance to express my thanks. I hope I can meet you sometime and express my thanks in person.Wish you all the best!Yours,Li Hua【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求针对初中生活好友的帮助，给李雷写一封感谢信，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第二人称来行文，时态以一般过去时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题，感谢对方的帮助；第二段介绍他是如何帮助你的；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。（2021·广西柳州·中考真题）假设你是李华，某英语网站正在举办以“感恩父母”为主题的征文活动。请根据表格中的内容用英文写一篇题为“A Letter to My Parents”的短文，用于投稿。你的感谢 父母养育你、每天为你做饭、生病时照顾你父母信任你、关心你的个人感受、遇到困难时鼓励你你的决心 努力学习你的祝愿 祝愿父母健康快乐注意：1.词数70左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.短文的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数；4.文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。参考词汇：感谢某人.....thank sb.for...养育raise做饭cook food生病be sick信任trust关心care about个人感受personal feeling处于困难中be in trouble健康的 healthyA Letter to My ParentsDear Mum and Dad,I’m writing to express my thanks for all your care and love.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanks again for everything you have done for me.Love,Li Hua【参考范文】A Letter to My ParentsDear Mum and Dad,I’m writing to express my thanks for all your care and love.First of all, I want to thank you for raising me.You cook for me every day and taking care of me when I’m sick.,I can’t grow healthy Without your help and attendance.You always trust and care about my personal feelings. I can't get out of the troubles without your encourage .It's so kind of you to give me thoughtful kindness.So I have to study hard to repay you. At the same time, I wish you keep healthy and happy.Thanks again for everything you have done for me.Love,Li Hua【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇给材料的书信作文，题目要求围绕提示内容写一篇题为“A Letter to My Parents”的短文，来感恩父母。注意要点齐全。2.写作指导：短文主要以第一人称来行文，时态以一般现在时为主。文章开头和结尾已给出，也给出了相关要点的词汇，在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。注意保证语法正确，无单词的拼写错误。（2017·黑龙江·中考真题）假如你是Mary，初中学习生活即将结束，请向你的老师（Mr. White）致谢，感谢他对你一直以来的教育、关心和帮助，并祝福老师健康快乐。Dear Mr.White,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Mary【参考范文】Dear Mr.White,How is your work recently Leaving you and lovely junior school life, I have so many words from my heart to say.I am writing to you because you are a hardworking,kind and strict teacher.Your lessons are always interesting. And you are friendly to us. You’re strict with us in study and also take care of us kindly. All my classmates agree that we get on well with each other for these years. I still remember when I failed in an exam, you encouraged me to keep trying. When I had trouble in life, you told me to be brave. Thanks to your help,I can make a rapid progress in the past three years.Without your help,I couldn't be more and more interested in English and get a such good grades.It's so kind of you to given me so much. .Thank you again for what you have done. I hope to have the chance to express my thanks. I hope I can meet you sometime and express my thanks in person.All the best!Yours,Mary【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是书信类书面表达，要求向自己的老师写一封感谢信，并祝老师健康快乐。2.写作指导：该题目人称主要使用第一人称和第二人称，时态主要使用一般过去时；内容包括：感谢老师对自己的教育、关心和帮助，并祝福老师健康快乐，同时注意结构要清晰条理，无单词拼写错误和语法使用错误。(名校模拟题提升练10篇)（2023·湖北武汉·统考模拟预测）假如你是李平，三年的初中生活就要结束了。老师们都很好，你最想感谢Mr. Jin。他在学习上、生活上甚至在你犯错误的时候给予你帮助，请你根据以下内容提示写信给他用英语写封信，表达自己的感激和依依惜别之情。内容提示：Why do you write this letter What did Mr. Jin do to help you How do you feel about your mistake Something more about your experience.…注意：字数60-80字；内容要连贯得体，不要逐条翻译；表达流畅、书写整洁，信的首尾已给出，不计入总字数；文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。Dear Mr. Jin,I will graduate soon. Looking back at the past three years, I have a lot to say._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Ping【答案】例文Dear Mr. Jin,I will graduate soon. Looking back at the past three years, I have much to say to you. You helped me with my lessons when I didn’t do well in my study. You asked me to wear more clothes to keep warm. You have given me so much help and encouragement. But I have done many things that made you angry. Last term, when we had classes online, I spent too much time playing computer games. I got bad grades without doubt. You tried your best to help me and formed my study habits.You always told me I could do better. I’ve changed a lot. I think I should say sorry and thanks to you. Best wishes to you and your family.Yours sincerely,Li Ping【详解】[总体分析]① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”，“现在完成时”和“一般现在时”；③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中我（李平）最想感谢Mr. Jin在学习上、生活上甚至在我犯错误的时候给予我帮助的介绍。表达自己的感激和依依惜别之情。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍三年的初中生活就要结束了，为感激老师而写这封信；第二步，介绍在学习上、生活上甚至在自己犯错误的时候老师给予自己的帮助；第三步，表达自己因做错事抱歉的感受以及感激和依依惜别之情。[亮点词汇]① do well in擅长，在……干得好② keep warm保温③ had classes online在线上课④ without doubt毫无疑问[高分句型]① But I have done many things that made you angry.（定语从句）② Last term, when we had classes online, I spent too much time playing computer games.（when引导时间状语从句）③ I think I should say sorry and thanks to you.（宾语从句）2．（2023·福建厦门·统考二模）感恩是中华民族的传统美德，懂得感恩是生命中的大智慧。初中阶段，一定有人帮助你、陪伴你、感动你。值此毕业之际，以信传情。请你根据要点提示，给你最想感谢的人写一封信，心怀感恩。内容要点：1. 表达对他/她的感谢；2. 回顾过去暖心的经历；3. 传达对他/她的美好祝愿。注意事项：1. 必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥；2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯；3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。Dear,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Dear Ms. Lee,I want to say “thank you” to you. In my junior high school life, you helps me a lot.You take good care of me and often help me with my English. When I am in trouble, you always encourage me to face my difficulties and give me good advice. I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset. You cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. Thanks to you, I have made great progress in English and am becoming more and more interested in it.I’m very thankful for all that you have done for me. I hope that you are healthy and happy every day.Yours,Li Hua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要感谢谁，表达感谢；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍过去经历；第三步，书写结语。表达美好祝愿。[亮点词汇]①take good care of好好照顾②encourage鼓励③upset烦恼的④made great progress取得极大的进步[高分句型]①When I am in trouble, you always encourage me to face my difficulties and give me good advice.（when引导时间状语从句）②I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset. （that引导宾语从句）3.（2023·吉林长春·吉林省第二实验学校校考一模）假如你是刘薇，在美国学习期间，你的寄宿家庭布朗夫妇对你帮助很大。下周一，你就要回国了。请给布朗夫妇写一封感谢信，表达你对他们的感激之情。内容：1.感到宾至如归；2.英语进步很大；3.邀请布朗夫妇来长春共度春节。要求：要点齐全；表述通顺；语言简洁；不少于40词。Dear Mr and Mrs Brown, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes. Liu Wei【答案】例文：Dear Mr and Mrs Brown,I will return to China next Monday. I’m writing to show my thanks to you. You are so kind to me and make me feel at home. With your help, my English has improved a lot. Would you like to come to Changchun to spend the Spring Festival with my family I’m looking forward to your coming.Best wishes.Liu Wei【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为感谢信；②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容”中的关键信息，写感谢信表达对布朗夫妇的感激之情并邀请他们来长春共度春节。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写信的目的是表示感谢；第二步，介绍布朗夫妇对自己的帮助；第三步，邀请布朗夫妇来长春与自己家人共度春节。[亮点词汇]①return to 返回②be kind to sb. 对某人友善③make sb. feel at home 使某人感到宾至如归④look forward to doing sth. 期待做某事[高分句型]Would you like to come to Changchun to spend the Spring Festival with my family （表示邀请的常见句型）4．（2023·吉林长春·统考二模）假如你是学校初三年级的学生会主席(President of the student union)，现在请你代表全校师生，为每天辛勤打扫卫生的环卫工人写一封感谢信。要点包括：①感谢您每日辛勤劳动；②为了保护生态环境，我们坚持不乱扔垃圾，为呵护环境尽一份力；③如果您工作累了可以随时来到我们学校休息，我们为您提供热水和食物。要求：以上要点全部包括，可以适当补充，语言清晰流畅，书写工整，不少于40词。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Dear the loveliest people,I am the President of the student union in the third grade of our school. I am writing this letter on behalf of all the teachers and students in the school to thank you for your hard cleaning every day.First of all, all of us thank you for your hard work every day. In addition, in order to protect the ecological environment, we insist on not littering and do our part to protect the environment. Last but not least, if you are tired from work, you can come to our school to have a rest at any time. We will provide you with hot water and food.In a word, you are the loveliest people in the world. Because of you, our world is so beautiful.President of the student union【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一封感谢信；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作目的是为了感谢环卫工人的辛勤劳动；第二步，具体从“感谢环卫工人辛勤劳动、我们应该如何做以及我们对环卫工人提供的帮助”几方面来表达感谢；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①in order to为了②have a rest休息③because of因为[高分句型]①In addition, in order to protect the ecological environment, we insist on not littering and do our part to protect the environment.（目的状语从句）②Last but not least, if you are tired from work, you can come to our school to have a rest at any time. （条件状语从句）5．（2023·辽宁丹东·统考一模） 假如你叫李华，是一名交换生。为期一年的法国交换生活即将结束，回国前，你的法国同学为你举办了盛大的欢送派对。请写封感谢信，感谢精彩的派对以及在法国期间同学们的帮助，你期待着再次去法国，同时表达你对同学们的祝福。要求：字迹工整，表达清晰有条理。词数 30 左右。Dear classmates,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes,Li Hua【答案】例文Dear classmates, Thank you for having a farewell party for me. I am so appreciative. We had a great time at the party. I also thank you for helping me during my stay in France. I am so lucky to meet these friends. I will miss you and am looking forward to coming to France soon. I wish you all the best.Best wishes,Li Hua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，表达自己的感谢；第二步，表达自己会怀念这些朋友，以及对同学们的祝福。[亮点词汇]①thank you for doing sth因为做某事感谢②have a great time玩得开心[高分句型]I am so lucky to meet these friends.（动词不定式作原因状语）6．（2023·全国·一模）假如你是Jim。前段时间你的朋友李华一直在帮助你学习中文歌和了解中华文化。现在你已经回国，请你根据以下要点给他写一封感谢信。要点包括：1. 表达感激之情；2. 回忆各种收获；3. 发出邀请。注意：1. 必须包含所有要点，词数80-100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和学校的名称。Dear Li Hua,How are you doing these days _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Looking forward to seeing you soon.Yours,Jim【答案】例文：Dear Li Hua,How are you doing these days I am writing to convey my gratitude for your kind help and care during my stay in your country, without which I wouldn’t have enjoyed it so much.Guided by you, I had a chance to visit some places of interest in China and experience such unique culture as well as beautiful scenery. Thanks to your generous help, I do believe that I have a better understanding of your country and culture. What’s more, I learned some Chinese songs with your help.I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness. I will show you around my country.Looking forward to seeing you soon.Yours,Jim【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点中的关键信息，写感谢信感谢李华的帮助并邀请他到自己的国家。[写作步骤]第一步，点明写信的目的是表示感谢；第二步，回忆自己的收获；第三步，邀请对方到自己的国家。[亮点词汇]①places of interest 名胜古迹②thanks to 多亏了[高分句型]①I am writing to convey my gratitude for your kind help and care during my stay in your country, without which I wouldn’t have enjoyed it so much.（“介词+which”引导定语从句）②I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness.（if引导的条件状语从句）7．（2023·天津·模拟预测）初中阶段的学习生活即将结束，回想自己在妈妈的关爱和帮助下的成长过程，心中充满感恩之情。请你根据以下要点提示以李华的名义给妈妈写一封感谢信。(1)自从我出生，您就一直照顾我；(2) 每天早上早起准备早点、水果，每天晚上做可口的饭菜；(3) 每天陪我写作业，复习功课；(4) 当我遇上麻烦，您总是鼓励我并帮我解决问题；(5) 妈妈，谢谢您……参考词汇：解决solve 陪伴accompany要求：(1)词数：80—100个。(2)信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。Dear Mum,How time flies! I will graduate from middle school. With the care and help of you, I have made great progress.You__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Dear Mum,How time flies! I will graduate from middle school. With the care and help of you, I have made great progress.You have taken care of me all the time since I was born. Every morning you get up early in order to make breakfast and get fruit ready for me. Every evening I can enjoy the delicious food which you make for me. When I do my homework and go over lessons every night, you often accompany me till midnight.Whenever I am in trouble, you always encourage me and help me solve problems.Thank you, my dear mother. I am so thankful for your love that I’ll work harder and try to do better in the future.Yours,Li Hua【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要根据题干中的提示内容给自己的妈妈写一封感谢信，可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段主要根据题干中的提示具体描述妈妈为自己做的事情；第三段表达对妈妈的感激之情。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。8．（2023·新疆乌鲁木齐·统考一模）若说青春是一段旅程，初中三年一定是其重要的一程。回顾过往三年，你一定感慨万千：谁在你成功时为你呐喊？谁在你失败时给你安慰和力量？谁又在你彷徨时指引你前进？也许是父母，也许是老师，也许是同伴……毕业在即，你一定有话想对他们说。假如你是李悦，请围绕以下要点写一篇英文感谢信：（1）Who do you want to write to （2）Why do you want to write to the person （3）What happened between you and the person （4）What have you learned from the experience 注意：1. 内容必须包含以上要点，并适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；3. 不少于100词Dear ______________,I am writing to express my sincere thanks to you because__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes,Li Yue【答案】例文：Dear Miss Gao,I am writing to express my sincere thanks to you because you have helped me a lot in the past three years.I still remember that you devoted your spare time to helping me with my English. I wasn’t good at English when I entered this school. Thus, I was so worried about it that I often cried silently after class. It was you who comforted me a lot and promised to help me improve it. I was advised to read aloud in the morning and speak as much as possible in class. Because of your useful advice and my hard work, I have made great progress in English in the past three years. Last year, I came first in the final English exam and both of us were very excited!I will never forget you though I will leave you soon. I really hope one day I will become an excellent English teacher like you so that I will help more children like me fall in love with English!Best wishes,Li Yue【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据提示问题写感谢信，在信中要有人物、原因、事件、学到了什么等内容。可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要先补全信件开头。正文以第一、二人称为主，结合具体语境采用合适的时态。在信中突出要感谢谁、感谢对方的原因、两人之间发生过什么事情、从中学到了什么。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。9．（2023·重庆合川·统考一模）书面表达。拿大中学生Peter在你校学习期满，回国后写一一封感谢信，同时指出了同学们的一些不良行为。假如你是学生会主席李华，请根据要点提示给Peter回一封电子邮件。要点提示：1. 表示感谢；2. 表达意愿（告别高声喧哗、乱丢乱扔等不良行为）；3. ……要求：1. 80词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。Dear Peter,I’m glad to receive your email._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!YoursLi Hua【答案】例文Dear Peter,I’m glad to receive your email. Thank you for telling us so much. I’m very sorry for what we have done.As a student, we should learn to have good habits. First, we will keep quiet in public. Also, we will no longer throw things here and there. What’s more, we won’t write or draw on the desks and other places, and we will be more polite to others.I’d like to invite you to visit our school again. I’m sure you will see a clearer school.Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua【详解】试题分析：考查提纲类作文，要求我们以学生会主席李华的身份给Peter写一封信，信中的主要内容包括对Peter提出的自己学校里存在的一些不良行为表示感谢，并表示决心改正这些不好的行为习惯。我们需要正确的英语将这些内容表达出来，动笔前，我们需要仔细分析需要表达的内容要点，不能遗漏要点，更不能跑题偏题。写作时注意运用正确时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。写作亮点：这篇短文中作者根据题目的要求给Peter写了回信，对Peter指出学校存在一些不良行为表示感谢，并下决心改正学生们的这些行为。短文内容完整，句意连贯。范文中使用了一些短语，如Thank you for, 因为某事而感谢某人；be sorry for因为…感到抱歉； learn to do sth., 学会做某事；keep quiet,保持安静； no longer, 不再；here and there, 到处；What’s more, 而且；be polite to others, 对某人有礼貌；invite sb. to do sth.,邀请某人去做某事等。这些短语的使用增强了文章表现力，使文意更连贯。10．（2022·黑龙江鸡西·校考模拟预测）假如你是刘华，Lucy送你一张英语学习卡作为生日礼物。它对你的学习非常有帮助，你也特别喜欢它。请你给Lucy写一封感谢信，表达你的感激之情。Dear Lucy,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Liu Hua【答案】例文Dear Lucy, Thank you for your English-studying cards. It helps me a lot with my English. I like it wery much. It’s my best birthday gift. Thank you again. Yours, Liu hua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇感谢信，为书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。感谢对方送的英语学习卡；第二步，介绍学习卡对自己的帮助并再次表示感谢。[亮点词汇]①Thank you for...感谢……②very much非常[高分句型]①It helps me a lot with my English.（help sb. with sth）②It’s my best birthday gift.（形容词最高级）专题14 书信邮件类之感谢信(考情分析)感谢信是对收信人的某一行为表示感谢的信件，通常用于收到别人的邀请或受到别人的帮助时。感谢信的写作目的非常明确，只要把需要感谢的人和事写清楚就行。(写作方法指导)感谢信的写作，可以分以下三段进行：第一段，简述写信的目的，诚挚地表达谢意，第二段，表明感谢的原因，回顾对方所做的具体事情，第三段，再次向对方表示感谢并表达希望回报对方的愿望。(写作模板)Dear ，（称呼）①How is your life/study/work recently In this letter I would like to thank you for your .（原因）／I'm writing to express my heartfelt gratitude.②I am writing to you because .（所做的事）Thanks to your help,I Without your help,I couldn't .It's so kind of you to .③ Thank you again for what you have done. I hope to have the chance to express my thanks. I hope | can meet you sometime and express my thanks in person.(愿望）④All the best!Yours sincerely,（署名）注：①问候并表明写作意图②详细描写感谢的原因③再次表示感谢并抒发愿望④表达祝愿模板内容可根据题目要求和具体情况取舍。(常用表达)必备亮点词汇heartfelt adj.衷心的 gratitude n.感激 grateful adj.感谢的，感激的sincerely adv.真诚地 kindness n.善良 hospitality n.热情好客，款待express v.表达 do sb. a favor 帮忙 in person 亲自from the bottom of one's heart 从心底 from the bottom of one's heart ......经典套用句型闪亮篇首句How time flies!时间过得真快啊！I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude.我写信是想表达我衷心的感激之情。How is your stay in... 您在······待着感觉怎么样？I am writing to you because I want to tell you a piece of good news that....我给您写信是因为我想告诉您一则······的好消息。I am writing to you because I want to thank you for your hospitality.我给您写信是想表达一下对您热情周到的招待的感激之情。I'm writing to express my thanks for...我写这封信是为了表达我对······的谢意。I am writing to you because...因为······,我给您写这封信。I'm writing to thank you for your great help!我写信来谢谢你巨大的帮助！出彩篇中句Many thanks for your kind and warm help.多谢您善良热情的帮助。Thank you for your generous hospitality.多谢您的款待。Thanks to your help,I can get the prize.多亏了您的帮助，我才得到了这个奖。精彩篇尾句I hope I can express my thanks to you in person.我希望能够亲自向您表达谢意。I'm sincerely grateful for all your help.对于您的帮助，我真的非常感激。Thank you for your kindness to have done me a favour.对于您的善意的帮忙，我向您表示感谢。Many thanks for all the good things you have done in helping us to...非常感谢您为帮助我们······所做的一切。I am glad to hear that you will visit our school soon.听说您很快会来我们学校参观，我特别高兴。(中考真题精讲)（2021·湖北黄石·中考真题）As an old saying goes, “A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart.” 假如你叫李华，在你的初中学习生涯中，一定有许多朋友给了你不少帮助。在毕业之际，请给你的好友李雷写一封感谢信。要点：1. 感谢他（她）对你的帮助。2. 他（她）是如何帮助你的。要求：1. 请结合具体事例，适当发挥；语言通顺，意思连贯。2. 文中不能出现与本人相关信息。3. 80词左右（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）。Dear Li Lei,How time flies! We are going to graduate from junior high school. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wish you all the best!Yours,Li Hua（2021·广西柳州·中考真题）假设你是李华，某英语网站正在举办以“感恩父母”为主题的征文活动。请根据表格中的内容用英文写一篇题为“A Letter to My Parents”的短文，用于投稿。你的感谢 父母养育你、每天为你做饭、生病时照顾你父母信任你、关心你的个人感受、遇到困难时鼓励你你的决心 努力学习你的祝愿 祝愿父母健康快乐注意：1.词数70左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.短文的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数；4.文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。参考词汇：感谢某人.....thank sb.for...养育raise做饭cook food生病be sick信任trust关心care about个人感受personal feeling处于困难中be in trouble健康的 healthyA Letter to My ParentsDear Mum and Dad,I’m writing to express my thanks for all your care and love.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanks again for everything you have done for me.Love,Li Hua（2017·黑龙江·中考真题）假如你是Mary，初中学习生活即将结束，请向你的老师（Mr. White）致谢，感谢他对你一直以来的教育、关心和帮助，并祝福老师健康快乐。Dear Mr.White,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Mary(名校模拟题提升练10篇)1.（2023·湖北武汉·统考模拟预测）假如你是李平，三年的初中生活就要结束了。老师们都很好，你最想感谢Mr. Jin。他在学习上、生活上甚至在你犯错误的时候给予你帮助，请你根据以下内容提示写信给他用英语写封信，表达自己的感激和依依惜别之情。内容提示：Why do you write this letter What did Mr. Jin do to help you How do you feel about your mistake Something more about your experience.…注意：字数60-80字；内容要连贯得体，不要逐条翻译；表达流畅、书写整洁，信的首尾已给出，不计入总字数；文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。Dear Mr. Jin,I will graduate soon. Looking back at the past three years, I have a lot to say._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Ping2．（2023·福建厦门·统考二模）感恩是中华民族的传统美德，懂得感恩是生命中的大智慧。初中阶段，一定有人帮助你、陪伴你、感动你。值此毕业之际，以信传情。请你根据要点提示，给你最想感谢的人写一封信，心怀感恩。内容要点：1. 表达对他/她的感谢；2. 回顾过去暖心的经历；3. 传达对他/她的美好祝愿。注意事项：1. 必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥；2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯；3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。Dear,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua3.（2023·吉林长春·吉林省第二实验学校校考一模）假如你是刘薇，在美国学习期间，你的寄宿家庭布朗夫妇对你帮助很大。下周一，你就要回国了。请给布朗夫妇写一封感谢信，表达你对他们的感激之情。内容：1.感到宾至如归；2.英语进步很大；3.邀请布朗夫妇来长春共度春节。要求：要点齐全；表述通顺；语言简洁；不少于40词。Dear Mr and Mrs Brown, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes. Liu Wei4．（2023·吉林长春·统考二模）假如你是学校初三年级的学生会主席(President of the student union)，现在请你代表全校师生，为每天辛勤打扫卫生的环卫工人写一封感谢信。要点包括：①感谢您每日辛勤劳动；②为了保护生态环境，我们坚持不乱扔垃圾，为呵护环境尽一份力；③如果您工作累了可以随时来到我们学校休息，我们为您提供热水和食物。要求：以上要点全部包括，可以适当补充，语言清晰流畅，书写工整，不少于40词。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·辽宁丹东·统考一模）假如你叫李华，是一名交换生。为期一年的法国交换生活即将结束，回国前，你的法国同学为你举办了盛大的欢送派对。请写封感谢信，感谢精彩的派对以及在法国期间同学们的帮助，你期待着再次去法国，同时表达你对同学们的祝福。要求：字迹工整，表达清晰有条理。词数 30 左右。Dear classmates,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes,Li Hua（2023·全国·一模）假如你是Jim。前段时间你的朋友李华一直在帮助你学习中文歌和了解中华文化。现在你已经回国，请你根据以下要点给他写一封感谢信。要点包括：1. 表达感激之情；2. 回忆各种收获；3. 发出邀请。注意：1. 必须包含所有要点，词数80-100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和学校的名称。Dear Li Hua,How are you doing these days _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Looking forward to seeing you soon.Yours,Jim（2023·天津·模拟预测）初中阶段的学习生活即将结束，回想自己在妈妈的关爱和帮助下的成长过程，心中充满感恩之情。请你根据以下要点提示以李华的名义给妈妈写一封感谢信。(1)自从我出生，您就一直照顾我；(2) 每天早上早起准备早点、水果，每天晚上做可口的饭菜；(3) 每天陪我写作业，复习功课；(4) 当我遇上麻烦，您总是鼓励我并帮我解决问题；(5) 妈妈，谢谢您……参考词汇：解决solve 陪伴accompany要求：(1)词数：80—100个。(2)信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。Dear Mum,How time flies! I will graduate from middle school. With the care and help of you, I have made great progress.You__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua（2023·新疆乌鲁木齐·统考一模）若说青春是一段旅程，初中三年一定是其重要的一程。回顾过往三年，你一定感慨万千：谁在你成功时为你呐喊？谁在你失败时给你安慰和力量？谁又在你彷徨时指引你前进？也许是父母，也许是老师，也许是同伴……毕业在即，你一定有话想对他们说。假如你是李悦，请围绕以下要点写一篇英文感谢信：（1）Who do you want to write to （2）Why do you want to write to the person （3）What happened between you and the person （4）What have you learned from the experience 注意：1. 内容必须包含以上要点，并适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；3. 不少于100词Dear ______________,I am writing to express my sincere thanks to you because__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes,Li Yue9．（2023·重庆合川·统考一模）书面表达。拿大中学生Peter在你校学习期满，回国后写一一封感谢信，同时指出了同学们的一些不良行为。假如你是学生会主席李华，请根据要点提示给Peter回一封电子邮件。要点提示：1. 表示感谢；2. 表达意愿（告别高声喧哗、乱丢乱扔等不良行为）；3. ……要求：1. 80词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。Dear Peter,I’m glad to receive your email._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!YoursLi Hua10．（2022·黑龙江鸡西·校考模拟预测）假如你是刘华，Lucy送你一张英语学习卡作为生日礼物。它对你的学习非常有帮助，你也特别喜欢它。请你给Lucy写一封感谢信，表达你的感激之情。Dear Lucy,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Liu Hua

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