建议信范文汇总（积累篇）

假设你是李华，你的笔友张明来信说他英语学的不大好，请你给他写一封回信，提一些建议，帮助他学好英语。内容提示：

     1. 一定要做好课前预习             2. 课堂上认真听讲，记好笔记

     3. 课后认真独立完成作业           4. 每天进行英语听说练习

     5. 加强课外阅读扩大词汇量

首段

1.写作背景

※After I read your letter, I learn that you are having trouble in learning English.

※After reading your letter, I learn that you are having trouble in learning English.

※I have received your letter, saying that you are having trouble in learning English.

※I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn English well.

2. 写作目的

※ I am writing to give you some suggestions ,which I think may be helpful to you.

※ I am writing to share my views upon this problem ,which I think may be helpful to you.

中间段

1.主旨句

※ Here are my suggestions/tips on learning English.

※ Here are several useful and practical suggestions for you.

※ Some suggestions can be listed as follows.

2. 建议内容

课前: 做好预习     prepare/ make preparations for

课堂: 上认真听讲,记好笔记   pay attention to what the teacher says carefully

课后: 认真独立完成作业  finish your homework by yourself/on your own

每天: 进行英语听说练习  practice listening and speaking every day

加强课外阅读扩大词汇量  enrich/enlarge your vocabulary.

结尾段

   Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. I have the confidence that you can master this beautiful language before long. Looking forward to your good news.

【高级建议句型】

1. be supposed to do  = should   

※ You are supposed to get rid of the feelings of being frustrated in order to keep a positive attitude towards life.     

2. You may consider doing sth. 

※ You may consider doing playing less game.

3. It is beneficial for you to do sth. 

※ It is beneficial for you to take part in after-class activities actively, to take part in after-class activities actively, building a relationship with your clasSmates.

4. I think it would be more beneficial if you could do sth. 

※ I think it would be more beneficial if you could eat less snacks and sleep more.

5.What you need to do first is to do sth. 

※ What you need to do first is to talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a   good way of releasing your anger.

6.I highly recommend that you should do sth. 

※ I highly recommend that you should get to know more different people and show them  that you are just as friendly.

【真题演练】

【2008全国II】假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文. 请你根据下列要点写回信.  要点:

1. 参加中文学习班;  2. 看中文书刊、电视；3. 学唱中文歌曲； 4. 交中国朋友。

注意：   

1.词数100左右；  2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已为你写好。

Dear Peter,

         I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Now, I am writing to give you a hand.

         Here are several useful and practical suggestions for you. To begin with, attending a Chinese course will provide you with the most widely used words and expressions. Moreover, some Chinese books and magazines as well as TV programs may help you know more about Chinese culture. What’s more, it is also beneficial for you to learn some Chinese songs, so that your pronunciation and your listening skills can be naturally improved. Finally, only when you make some Chinese friends and often chat with them can you have enough chance to practice you Chinese.

         Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. If there is anything else I can do for you, please drop me a line to let me know. I have the confidence that you can master this beautiful language before long. Looking forward to your good news.

         Best wishes

Li Hua

建议信写作及实战建议

一、建议信写作

1. 写信原因及目的；    2. 提出具体建议并说明原因；    3. 希望采纳建议，表达美好祝愿。

二、建议信写作可用句式：

1. I'm Sorry to hear that (you are having trouble in...) Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.

2. You have asked me for advice with regard to/concerning...., and I’ll make some suggestions here.

3. I’m more than delighted to receive your letter asking for my advice on...

4. I’m writing to share my views on this problem, which I think may be helpful to you.

5. I would like to make some constructive suggestions/offer you the following suggestions, hoping to help you.

6. I do hope/Hopefully, these suggestions will be of great used to you.

7. I sincerely hope that you’ll find my suggestions beneficial.

8. To begin with, it would be wiser to do...

9. As far as I’m concerned, some measures should be taken to do sth.

10. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way.

11. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.

12. I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work!

13. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.

14. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you.Wish you a pleasant trip to Beijing.

三、实战演练:

为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。

内容要点如下：1. 表示理解并给予安慰；        2. 提出建议并说明理由。

1. 很遗憾得知你现在很难控制住自己的脾气。这样的问题很正常，可能下面的建议会有帮助。

2. 首先，跟你信任的人谈你的感受。这样能释放你的愤怒，又不伤害到别人或自己。

3. 另外，多和朋友进行户外运动也是一种有效的方式。

4. 最重要的是， 对你的未来保持积极的心态， 这对提升你的情绪很有好处。

5. 希望你不久就能冷静下来，恢复正常。

Dear James,

Sorry to hear about your situation. The following are some suggestions for you to relieve stress.

Preparing for the college entrance examinations is a long-term and complicated process and confidence plays an important role in it, so build up your confidence and never give up easily. Besides, you should find out your own strengths and weaknesses in your study, and seek help from both teachers and clasSmates in face of difficulties. Most importantly, you are supposed to do more physical exercise to keep fit as well as relax yourselves.

     Do remember: less pressure, better life! Best wishes to you!(99字)

Yours

Li Hua

独立完成：

假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Jamie发邮件告诉你他对中国传统文学非常感兴趣,但是在阅读时遇到了很多困难, 比如很多汉字不认识, 读不懂文章的意思等, 他希望得到你的帮助。请用英文给Jamie回邮件。内容要点如下: 1. 表示理解并给予安慰; 2. 提出建议并说明理由。

独立完成：

Dear Jamie,

      Glad to know that you’re interested in traditional Chinese literature. As a non-native speaker, such problems are quite normal, so there’s no need to feel upset. Here are some useful tips.

      To begin with, turn to the Internet when in trouble, where you can learn how to read and write the characters. Additionally, you can learn from Chinese around and I'm always here to help. Most importantly, you should keep on learning and reading. In this way, you’ll surely make progress.

     Hopefully, my advice will be of benefit to you. Looking forward to your improvement. (100字)

Yours,

Li Hua

假定你是李华，你的英语朋友Peter来信向你询问如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。

要点：1. 参加中文学习班； 2. 看中文书刊，电视；3. 学唱中文歌曲； 4. 交中国朋友。

Dear Peter,

           I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.You had better attend a Chinese course, where, with other students, you can learn under the guidance of a teacher. Being repeatedly exposed to Chinese books, magazines, and TV can also help you a lot. it is beneficial to you to learn to sing Chinese songs, which can make your learning more interesting and effective. In addition, you can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.

          Looking forward to your progress. (100字)

Yours,

Li Hua

假如你是李华，你的朋友James来信说，随着高考的临近，学习和心理压力日益加大，正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请你用英文给他写一封回信。内容要点如下：1.表示理解并给予安慰 2.提出建议并说明理由。

Dear James,

         I am awfully Sorry that you are so stressed that it has affected your study and life. However, the situation can't be unchangeable if you take the following suggestions.

        To begin with, keep a balance between study and rest. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Additionally, it's highly recommended to have brief conversations with close friends or trustworthy teachers, from whom you are bound to get confidence. Most importantly, you’ll be more organized and less likely to be affected by pressure if you make a regular learning schedule.

       Please take my suggestions into account. I’m convinced everything will be better and may you succeed this summer.

Yours,

Li Hua

建议信实战演练：

Dear worried,

           I’m Sorry to know that you’re having trouble controlling your temper. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.

          To begin with, talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a wise way to let your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Additionally, go outdoor activities with your friends is also an effective way. Most importantly, remain a positive attitude towards life, which is of great benefit to lifting your spirits.

         Hopefully, you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal. (94词)

Yous,

Jamie

1）

假定你是李华。新落成的外文书店为增加访客量现向市民征求建议，请给书店经理Mr. Davis写一封建议信，内容包括：

1. 拥有宽敞的空间以提供良好的阅读体验；

2. 提供咨询、讲座等服务；

3. 其他建议（至少一条）。

注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mr. Davis,

     Congratulations on your newly-opened bookstore and here are some suggestions on how to increase the popularity of your store.

     Firstly, spacious room （that provides readers with a cozy and agreeable reading environment） is essential so as to ensure a pleasant and satisfactory reading experience. Secondly, services （like consultation and lectures） are highly recommended, with which consumers can make more proper choices of books and their interest in reading might be stimulated as well. In addition, it is also a wise choice to set up a coffee and snack section to add more fun to the bookstore.

     Hope you’ll find my suggestions useful and wish you great success in your business.

Yours sincerely, 

                                                              Li Hua

2）

假定你是李华，你的笔友王祥最近沉迷于电脑游戏，严重影响了学习和身心健康。劝说他戒掉这一不良习惯，并对他的学习生活给出自己的建议。

注意:

1.词数100左右;

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3.开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Wang Xiang，

      I felt more than worried to hear that you are deeply addicted to computer games, which has seriously affected your study and mental and physical health. As far as I am concerned, it’s wiser of you to get rid of them.

     Addicted to playing online games, you are wasting your valuable time, which should be spent on your study. Meanwhile, being exposed to games for too long will be bound to do great harm to your health, both mentally and physically.  Therefore, wouldn’t it be better for you to break away from them? The earlier, the better. What’s more, you should manage your time more wisely and find some meaningful ways to spend your free time, such as reading more books, taking more exercise, or taking part in social activities, which I believe will help you make progress both in your study and health.

      In a word, I hold a firm belief that you will take my advice into consideration. Looking forward to your good news.

                                              Yours,

Li Hua

3） 

假定你是李华,你的好友李顺在朋友圈留言说，他不知怎样提高学习效果，心里很着急。希望得到你的帮助，给他一些合理的建议。你的回复包括以下要点:

1.表示关心;

2.合理建议(至少2条)。

注意:

1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3.开头和结尾已给出,但不计人总词数。

Dear Li Hua,

       I’m very Sorry to learn from your Moments that you are in a difficult situation and you are upset about how to improve the learning effects. Now I’d like to give you some advice on the problem, hoping to help you out.

       To begin with, you should learn how to learn efficiently and practice some effective learning methods, such as previewing lessons, getting actively involved in class, and reviewing what has been taught after class, which really have benefited me a lot. In addition, just as the old saying goes, “ A watched pot never boils.” Therefore, too great inner worries won’t help. Instead, you will feel depressed and frustrated. However, in the long run, only if you stick to the good learning practice will you improve your learning effects gradually and achieve your academic goals.

       I do hope you will find these suggestions helpful and I firmly believe you will make great progress soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

4）

     假定你是李华，你的美国朋友 Tristan 对你校正在举行的"中华好书分享"活动很感兴趣，希望你介绍此活动，并推荐好书。请你写封信，内容包括：

1. 该活动的意义；

2. 同学们参与的情况；

3. 你推荐的书籍及理由。

注意：

1.词数 100 左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Tristan,

       I'd be glad to introduce this wonderful activity. The aim is to enlarge our reading horizon by sharing good books and helps to appreciate our own culture as well. Many of my clasSmates have taken an active part and recommended for me many fantastic classical Chinese books. I share with a book named The Journey to the West (Chinese pinyin as Xiyouji), which is listed in the Four Great Chinese Classical Novels. The adventures in the book are described in a fascinating style, so it has been translated in many languages, English of course included.

       Could you recommend some good books to me as well? Looking forward to your reply. And I'd be really thankful.

Yours,

Li Hua

5）

     假如你是李华。某中学生英语报社准备增设一个Environmental Protection的栏目，为此报社就报道内容与方式向读者征求建议。请你根据以下提示给编辑写封信，提出你的建议。

1．报道内容广泛；

2．报道应包括原因、危害，并重点突出应对方法；

3．语言简单易懂，适合更多的读者。

注意：

1．词数80左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear editor，

        I'm glad to know from your paper that you are asking readers for suggestions on your new section，Environmental Protection. Mine are as follows：

        The section should cover a wide range of environmental concerns and meanwhile，each report should include causes，effects and more importantly，effective measures，thus making the public aware that everyone should and can do something to deal with environmental problems. Besides，reports should be written in simple English in order to attract as many readers as possible.

         I'd appreciate it if you could take my advice into account.

Yours truly，

Li Hua

6）

假定你是李海，你的堂兄李华在国外学习，你们经常用英文通信。他即将完成学业，不久前来信就是否回国工作征求你的意见。请根据下列提示回信：

1．建议他回国；

2．你的理由：(1)学有所用，就业容易；(2)照顾父母。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2．行文应连贯，内容应完整；

Dear Li Hua，

         I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago. I’ve been thinking about the question you asked me. In my opinion, you should come back after you finish your studies abroad. For one reason, what you are studying is badly needed nowadays in China. It’ll be quite easy for you to find a good job. In fact, I know a few big companies in our city are hoping to hire people like you. For another reason, I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents as they’re getting old. Therefore, I think it’s a good idea for you to return.  So，what are you waiting for?

        Best wishes.

Yours，

Li Hai

7）

假定你是学生会主席李华，你听说Peter下学期要来我们学校任教，你写信向他推荐高三学生李民作为他的助理。推荐理由如下：

1．李民在校表现突出；

2．勤奋，能熟练使用计算机，善于与他人交流；

3．学校的优秀生之一，英语口语好。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2．可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter，

         I’m Li Hua, Chairman of the Students' Union. Hearing you’re coming to teach in our school next semester, I’m writing to recommend Li Min, a Senior 3 student of 18, to be your assistant.

         His performance was outstanding in the school years. He is a diligent boy, who can use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others. What’s more, he’s one of the top ten students in our school, and his spoken English is extremely excellent. I'm sure he can be helpful in your work and life in China. Therefore, I recommend him to you.

        If you have any question about it, please contact me.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

8）  

假如你是李华，你的英国网友Chris打算抽空到中国学习太极（Tai Chi），他写信向你求助，请你根据下列要点给对方写一封回信：    1．介绍学太极好处；

   2．负责联系学习地点和老师； 注意：

  1．词数100左右． 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．

Dear Chris，       I’m very pleased to know that you show great interest in a Chinese traditional sport Tai Chi and are eager to learn it. I’m quite willing to give you some help.

      In China, Tai Chi is not only an ancient martial art (武术), but is also very good exercise with many health benefits. It is believed that Tai Chi can build up muscles and strength, improve flexibility and balance, prevent and treat many health problems like heart disease, high blood pressure, stress and anxiety and so on, thus delaying aging and prolonging life. As for the learning place and instructor, there are many to choose from in my city. If you’ve made up your mind to come and learn, I’ll recommend the best school and teacher here to you. You can/may rest assured (放心) that you will do fine.      Looking forward to your coming soon!

Yours  Li Hua

9）

假定你是李华，在一位名叫Tiger Mum 的学生家长博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。

        I’m the mother of a fourteen-year-old girl. I have a rule for my daughter: be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another. She has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her. Am I wrong?

   写作要点：

   1. 表明自己的看法；

   2. 陈述自己的理由（可举例说明）；

  要求：

   1. 字数100左右；

   2. 内容充实，结构完整，寓意连贯。

Dear Tiger Mum，

         What puzzles you is actually a puzzle to many other parents in China. I don’t feel that it would be proper for you to do so. (Expressing your opinion)

         For one thing, although test scores/exam results are used as a measure of students’ academic performance at school and are very important for admission to key universities,  their mental and physical health, other abilities and qualities should never be ignored. In fact, good marks/grades can’t explain everything. Some top school students have turned out less successful in society than expected. Also, children need more encouragement than punishment, which is by no means the only way to help them to grow up. (Giving your reasons and examples)

     In short, I think the best way of education is to encourage children to do their best to be all-round persons ̶ clever, optimistic, lively, healthy as well as hard-working. (Summary)

     I hope my ideas can be of some help/use to you. (Ending)

                                            Yours                                                                  

                                             Li Hua

 10)

 假定你是高中学生李华，你的美国朋友Jim即将升入中国的一所高中学习，想让你给他一些学习建议。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：   1．课前准备；   2．课堂表现；   3．其它建议。 注意：1．词数100左右；   2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．

Dear Jim,

       I’m very happy/pleased/delighted to learn that you will come to study in China. I think (that) it will be easy for you to adapt to the study life here if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you:

        First, you’d better make good preparations before class. If you do that, you will have fewer problems in class.

Secondly, you should take an active part in the class activities. Most importantly, you should concentrate on what the teacher says and take notes, which will help you remember what you have learned in class. Thirdly, it would be a good idea to go over your lessons and finish your homework in time after class in case you forget what is learned quickly.

       I hope you will find these ideas useful.

                                              Yours

                                               Li Hua

11)

假定你是李华，最近你们班进行了关于保护文化遗产的讨论。请根据以下要点用英语给中 学生报的编辑 Smith 写一封信，主要内容包括以下要点。

  1、说明写信目的；

  2、介绍讨论结果：多数同学认为重要（古代伟大文明的象征；增强民族自豪感）；

  3、提出你的关于保护文化遗产的建议（至少两条）；

  4、期望编辑提出建议。

   注意： 1．词数 120 左右。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）

   2．可适当增加细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。

   3．文中不要用真实人名、校名等。 参考词汇：文化遗产 cultural relics

  Dear Mr.Smith,

       I am Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Senior 2. Recently our class had a heated discussion about how to protect the cultural relics. I’m writing to tell you about it.(写法1)

       I am Li Hua, a high school student. I am writing to tell you about the heated discussion that recently our class had about how to protect the cultural relics. (写法2)

       Most of us students consider it of great importance to protect the cultural relics. We think that the cultural relics are a symbol of our great ancient civilization, which can inspire us with national pride. (我们讨论的结果) Therefore, strong measures should be taken to preserve/ conserve the cultural relics. For one thing, we should raise the public awareness of protection through education and advertising. For another, more money should be spent on the repair and fire safety and laws should be strengthened to ban the historic buildings from being destroyed. (我的建议)

      We hope our student newspaper will play an important role in helping to protect the cultural relics and make some constructive suggestions.

      Best wishes!

                                               Yours

                                               Li Hua

12）

假定你是李华，是你班的英语课代表。本学期初，新外教Steve想了解同学们对口语课的建议。请你代表班级给他写一份邮件，内容包括：

1. 感兴趣的话题；

2. 授课方式；

3. 考试形式。

Dear Steve,

      I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student of yours. Very pleased to know that you are open to the students’ ideas about the oral English lessons, I’m writing on behalf of our class to make some suggestions.

      When it comes to our favorite topics, we find most appealing are those in your country, covering school life, culture and customs, artificial intelligence, environmental protection and so on.  As far as the teaching methods are concerned, besides lectures, we would prefer it if you could involve us in more class activities so as to give us more chances to practise our spoken English. As for the final exam, we welcome the most up-to-date form— the computer-assisted oral English test.

      Thank you for taking our suggestions into consideration.   

   Yours,

    Li Hua