2024届高考英语作文答题模板与解题技巧

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活动报道第一段 导语：一句话或一段话概述新闻或活动发生的时间、地点、人物、事件第二段 主体：详细描写所报道的事实第三段 结束语：对该事件进行简要总结、评价或预测【满分词汇模板】单词 activity活动； sports meet运动会； event赛事； witness见证； hold举行； stadium体育场； present出席； estimate估计； cooperate合作； cheer欢呼； benefit收益； observe观察；短语 gain a lot收获颇丰 ; be fruitful收获颇丰； apart from除......之外； exhausted as...虽然精疲力尽的； participate in 参加； be full of充满了；【满分句型模板】【满分作文模板】（导语）Aiming to encourage the students to _______. Our school organized a _______ on _______（时间）at _______(地点），which _______.（正文）It was a _______ day（介绍天气）. First of all ,_______. Then_______（介绍活动的过程）.Finally, _______.（总结）_________ benefited us a lot. Not only did it_______, it also _______. What a (n) _______activity!【满分作文模板示例】为了增强学生的安全防范意识，今天上午你校组织了紧急逃生疏散演练活动。假定你是李华，请你给校英文广播站写一篇相关的新闻报道，内容包括：1．活动目的；2．活动流程；3．活动感受。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：疏散演练 evacuation drill_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分作文】In order to enhance the security awareness of our students, and teach them what to do when a fire or an emergency happens, our school organized a fire evacuation drill this morning.At half past nine o’clock am, we heard the alarm. Instructed by some teachers in charge, we rushed to the appointed areas in order. Afterwards, we followed the messages on the air to head for the safe place. On arriving at the playground, we stood in line. Our headmaster made a summary, attaching great importance to safety.Not only did the drill increase our knowledge of protecting ourselves in the face of emergencies, a fire in particular, but also provided a precious opportunity to deal with them.【译文】为了提高学生的安全意识，教他们在发生火灾或紧急情况时如何做，我们学校今天上午组织了一次火灾疏散演习。上午九点半钟，我们听到了警报声。在一些主管老师的指导下，我们匆忙有序地赶到了指定的区域。之后，我们按照广播中的信息前往安全的地方。一到操场，我们就开始排队了。我们的校长作了一个总结，非常重视安全。这次演习不仅增加了我们在面对紧急情况，特别是火灾时保护自己的知识，而且还提供了应对这些火灾的宝贵机会。（2023·全国·高三专题练习）最近外卖风靡校园，很多高中生喜欢点外卖。虽然这种订餐方式使人们的生活更加方便快捷，但同时也存在着不少的弊端。因此，你校上周三举办了一场“远离外卖，健康饮食”的校园活动，假如你是李华，请为校报写一篇新闻报道，要点包括：1.活动的缘由和意义；2.活动的内容和形式；3.你的感想和收获。参考词汇：点外卖order take-out food 塑料包装plastic packages注意:1. 写作词数应为80词左右(文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数) ；2.文中不得出现学校、姓名等与考生本人相关的任何信息。3.语句通顺，意思连贯，可根据提示适当发挥；With the popularity of take-out food in schools, more and more students enjoy the convenience it brings.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】With the popularity of take-out food in schools, more and more students enjoy the convenience it brings. Although ordering food brings some benefits to our life, it has many drawbacks. In order to help students develop good and healthy eating habits, the school held an activity “Stay away from takeout and eat healthy” last Wednesday. Here are the details of the activity.During the activity, students watched various related videos and pictures, which showed the production process of some takeaway food in a dirty environment and the bad impact of plastic packages on the environment. There is no doubt that this activity is meaningful and beneficial. It can not only enhance our health awareness, but also teach us to be environmentally friendly in our daily life.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给就上周三举办的“远离外卖，健康饮食”的校园活动，写一篇报道。【详解】1.词汇积累缺点：drawback→disadvantage形成：develop → form各种各样的：various→a variety of有意义的：meaningful→ significant2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：In order to help students develop good and healthy eating habits, the school held an activity “Stay away from takeout and eat healthy” last Wednesday.拓展句：In order to help students develop good and healthy eating habits, the school held an activity which is called “Stay away from takeout and eat healthy” last Wednesday.【点睛】【高分句型1】Although ordering food brings some benefits to our life, it has many drawbacks. （运用了although引导让步状语从句）【高分句型2】During the activity, students watched various related videos and pictures, which showed the production process of some takeaway food in a dirty environment and the bad impact of plastic packages on the environment.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）（2023·江苏·高三校联考阶段练习）假定你是李华,上周五你校组织了一场关于保护方言的重要性的讲座,请你为校英文报写一篇新闻报道,内容包括:1.讲座时间和参加人员;2.讲座的内容;3.活动意义。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Protecting Dialects_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Protecting DialectsLast Friday, all senior three students participated in a speech concerning protecting dialects.From this speech, we were aware that a dialect, carriers of local culture and history, was not only beneficial to the inheritance of local cultures, but also could make people from the same region more closely connected. In addition, some expressions in dialects made it easier and more efficient for locals to communicate.This activity proved to be a great success, making us understand the importance of protecting dialects from a more comprehensive and deeper angle. More importantly, it also inspired us to take relevant measures immediately.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生为校英文报写一篇新闻报道上周五你校组织了一场关于保护方言的重要性的讲座。其内容包括：讲座时间和参加人员、讲座的内容和活动意义。【详解】1.词汇积累意识到：aware →conscious此外：In addition→what’s more重要性：importance →significance激励：inspire→motivate2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Last Friday, all senior three students participated in a speech concerning protecting dialects.拓展句：Last Friday, all senior three students participated in a speech concerning protecting dialects, which benefited them a lot.【点睛】【高分句型1】From this speech, we were aware that a dialect, carriers of local culture and history, was not only beneficial to the inheritance of local cultures, but also could make people from the same region more closely connected. （运用了that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】This activity proved to be a great success, making us understand the importance of protecting dialects from a more comprehensive and deeper angle. （运用了现在分词作状语）（2023·全国·高三专题练习）假如你是李华，2月27日你们全班同学参观了市博物馆。请你为校英文报写一篇新闻报道，内容包括：1. 参与人员、 时间；2. 活动内容； 3. 活动反响。注意：1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。A Visit to the City Museum_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 A Visit to the City MuseumOn March 20th, all the students in Class 7, Grade 12 paid a visit to the city museum, which turned out to be a rewarding and productive journey.With the guidance of the museum staff, the students walked from one exhibition hall to another, appreciating the delicate art works made by our ancestors with keen interest. They were also lucky enough to get involved in a hands-on activity where they practiced some traditional crafts.This immersive experience was highly spoken of by every student , who gained a deeper insight into magnificent Chinese culture and consequently took more pride in our time-honored civilization.【导语】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生为校英文报写一篇新闻报道，报道2月27日你们全班同学参观了市博物馆的情况。【详解】1. 词汇积累原来是：turn out→prove to be欣赏：appreciate→enjoy幸运的：lucky→fortunate获得：gain→obtain2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：With the guidance of the museum staff, the students walked from one exhibition hall to another, appreciating the delicate art works made by our ancestors with keen interest.拓展句：The students, who were guided by the museum staff, walked from one exhibition hall to another and appreciated the delicate artworks made by our ancestors with keen interest.【点睛】[高分句型1]On March 20th, all the students in Class 7, Grade 12 paid a visit to the city museum, which turned out to be a rewarding and productive journey.(whhich引导非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]They were also lucky enough to get involved in a hands-on activity where they practiced some traditional crafts.(where引导的限制性定语从句)（2023·全国·高三专题练习）假定你是李华，你校上周六晚举办了一场露天晚会，以庆祝学校成立60周年。请为你校的英文报写一篇新闻报道。内容包括：1. 晚会目的、时间、地点；2. 晚会过程；3. 观众反响。参考词汇：周年纪念日 anniversary注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】An open-air party was held in the school playground to celebrate the 60th anniversary of our school last Saturday evening.Organized by the music club, the party attracted hundreds of students. The party started at 7:00 p. m. , and the audience was first impressed by an inspiring song by two students, to which twenty performers danced. What followed was more appealing, which included operas, short plays, and magic shows. The party ended at 9:30 p. m. So fascinating was the party that the audience was looking forward to more events like this.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的新闻报道。要求考生为校英文报写一篇新闻报道，报道学校上周六晚举办的一场露天晚会的情况。【详解】1.词汇积累吸引：attract → appeal to鼓舞人心的：inspiring → encouraging动人的、迷人的：appealing → engaging/fetching结束：end → come to an end2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Organized by the music club, the party attracted hundreds of students.拓展句：The party, which was organized by the music club, attracted hundreds of students.【点睛】【高分句型1】The party started at 7:00 p. m., and the audience was first impressed by an inspiring song by two students, to which twenty performers danced. (运用了介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】So fascinating was the party that the audience was looking forward to more events like this. (运用了so...that引导的结果状语从句的倒装)（2023·全国·高三专题练习）学校于上周三下午在学校篮球场, 举行了篮球比赛决赛 (the basketball final), 请你为校英语报写一份新闻报道, 内容如下:1. 比赛时间和地点;2. 赛程回顾;3. 赛后反响。注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以根据内容要点适当发挥, 以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The Wonderful Basketball FinalLast Wednesday afternoon witnessed a competitive basketball final in the school gym, which sparked/fueled students’ burning passion for playing basketball. On the basketball court, Class 3 Grade 3 played against Class 8 Grade 3 for the final championship, which was a well-matched(势均力敌的)game.The referee blowing his whistle, the match began. All the players outdid themselves to excel(奋勇争先)on the court. They spared no effort to offend(进攻) and defend(防守): the point guard(组织后卫)passing the ball, the center(中锋)fighting for the rebounds(篮板) and the forward(前锋) shooting a basket. The scores leading alternately(比分交替领先), the atmosphere was electric. With cheerleaders and basketball fans enthusiastically cheering around, players were fiercely competing for the championship. Finally, The Class 3 won the final by a narrow margin (以微弱优势). The champion team was presented with an award and the leader addressed a speech, which boosted the morale (提升了士气)of all the basketball teams.The activity turned out to be a huge success, which was highly thought of by all of the teachers and students. Not only did it provide a platform for us to relieve/release our pressure and add spice to our dull routine, but it also strengthened our cohesion(凝聚力)and friendship.【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生为校英语报写一份新闻报道，报道学校举办的篮球比赛决赛。【详解】1. 词汇积累目睹，见证：witness → observe开始：begin → start不遗余力，竭尽全力：spare no effort → make efforts激烈地：fiercely → intensely2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：All the players outdid themselves to excel(奋勇争先)on the court. They spared no effort to offend(进攻) and defend(防守):...拓展句：All the players outdid themselves to excel(奋勇争先)on the court, where they spared no effort to offend(进攻) and defend(防守):...【点睛】【高分句型1】The referee blowing his whistle, the match began. （运用了分词独立主格）【高分句型2】The activity turned out to be a huge success, which was highly thought of by all of the teachers and students. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）（2023·全国·高三专题练习）假设你是李华，上周末你校举办了以“发展中国（Developing China）”为主题的摄影展，请你写一英文新闻报道来介绍这个活动。内容包括：1.展览的时间和地点；2.展览的内容和意义。注意：1. 词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；A photography exhibition on “Developing China”____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 A photography exhibition on “Developing China”Last weekend witnessed an extraordinary photography exhibition on “Developing China” held by our school in the students’ center, which drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school.As planned, there were more than 150 exhibits, most of which recorded and presented the rapid development of China, such as the Fuxing Electric Multiple Unit exhibit demonstrating China’s technical skill in HSR design and construction, the Covid-19 vaccines exhibit displaying the competence of Chinese leading pharmaceutical and biotech companies, to name but a few. Consequently, all the audience marveled at the remarkable achievements made by China.The photography exhibition was highly spoken of, because not only did it provide a chance for us to better know the development taking place in China, but also it enhanced our sense of national pride.【导语】本文是一篇应用文。假设你是李华，上周末你校举办了以“发展中国（Developing China）”为主题的摄影展，请你写一英文新闻报道来介绍这个活动。内容包括：展览的时间和地点；展览的内容和意义。【详解】1.词汇积累见证：witness→see吸引：draw→attract展示：display→show因此：Consequently→Therefore2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Last weekend witnessed an extraordinary photography exhibition on “Developing China” held by our school in the students’ center, which drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school.拓展句：Last weekend witnessed an extraordinary photography exhibition on “Developing China” which was held by our school in the students’ center, drawing the attention of every student and teacher of our school.【点睛】[高分句型1] As planned, there were more than 150 exhibits, most of which recorded and presented the rapid development of China, such as the Fuxing Electric Multiple Unit exhibit demonstrating China’s technical skill in HSR design and construction, the Covid-19 vaccines exhibit displaying the competence of Chinese leading pharmaceutical and biotech companies, to name but a few.(运用了介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句和独立主格结构)[高分句型2] The photography exhibition was highly spoken of, because not only did it provide a chance for us to better know the development taking place in China, but also it enhanced our sense of national pride.(运用了because引导的状语从句和not only...but also连接句子时，not only位于句首，该部分用部分倒装)（2023·黑龙江齐齐哈尔·统考三模）假定你是李华，上周你校举办了主题为“Live Lightly &. Give Generously”的活动。请你为校英文报写一篇英语新闻稿，报道此次活动。内容包括：1.活动的时间、地点;2.主要活动安排;3.学生们的感受。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Live Lightly & Give Generously_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Live Lightly & Give GenerouslyOur school held a meaningful activity last week, whose theme was “Live Lightly &. Give Generously”. The event took place on Friday on the playground.The main activities of the event included a charity auction, where students could donate items to sell and have the money donated to a local charity organization, and a sharing session, where students shared their experiences and insights on how to live a simple yet meaningful life.This experience has taught us that we don’t need a lot to be happy, and giving to others can be the key to fulfillment.【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生为校英文报写一篇英语新闻稿，报道学校举办的主题为“Live Lightly &. Give Generously”的活动。【详解】1.词汇积累发生：take place→come about捐赠：donate→give away高兴的：happy→delighted有意义的：meaningful→significant2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：The event took place on Friday on the playground.拓展句：The event took place on Friday on the playground, which all the students and teachers will take part in.【点睛】[高分句型1]Our school held a meaningful activity last week, whose theme was “Live Lightly &. Give Generously”.(运用了whose引导非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]This experience has taught us that we don’t need a lot to be happy, and giving to others can be the key to fulfillment.(运用了that引导宾语从句)（2023·河南开封·统考三模）4月3号至7号，你校举办了一场书籍义卖活动。假设你是校英文报的一名记者，请你以“A Charity Book Fair”为题，写一篇新闻报道。内容包括：1．活动的目的;2．活动的时间、地点和内容;3．活动的反响。注意：1．词数100左右;2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3．题目已为你拟好。A Charity Book Fair____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A Charity Book FairTo collect money for children with disabilities, our school organized a charity book fair from April 3 to April 7, every afternoon from 5 to 8 at the students’ hall.Before the event, the principal delivered an inspiring speech calling on students to actively participate in this public welfare activity. Then, the students responded passionately. Some volunteered to donate a lot of books. And others boosted the morale of these helpful students by visiting the book fair and buying the books they are interested in.The activity was highly spoken of. Not only did it provide a chance for the students to pay less for the books they desired, but it also allowed them to contribute to children with disabilities.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。4月3号至7号，你校举办了一场书籍义卖活动。假设你是校英文报的一名记者，请你以“A Charity Book Fair”为题，写一篇新闻报道。【详解】1.词汇积累筹集：collect→raise演讲：speech→lecture参加：participate in→take part in回答：respond→reply2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Before the event, the principal delivered an inspiring speech calling on students to actively participate in this public welfare activity.拓展句：Before the event, the principal delivered an inspiring speech, which called on students to actively participate in this public welfare activity.【点睛】[高分句型1] To collect money for children with disabilities, our school organized a charity book fair from April 3 to April 7, every afternoon from 5 to 8 at the students’ hall. (运用了不定式作目的状语)[高分句型2] Not only did it provide a chance for the students to pay less for the books they desired, but it also allowed them to contribute to children with disabilities. (运用了部分倒装)活动报道第一段 导语：一句话或一段话概述新闻或活动发生的时间、地点、人物、事件第二段 主体：详细描写所报道的事实第三段 结束语：对该事件进行简要总结、评价或预测【满分词汇模板】单词 __________活动； __________运动会； __________赛事； __________见证； __________举行； __________体育场； __________出席； __________估计； __________合作； __________欢呼； __________收益； __________观察；短语 __________收获颇丰 ; __________收获颇丰； __________除......之外； __________虽然精疲力尽的； __________ 参加； __________充满了；【满分句型模板】【满分作文模板】（导语）Aiming to encourage the students to _______. Our school organized a _______ on _______（时间）at _______(地点），which _______.（正文）It was a _______ day（介绍天气）. First of all ,_______. Then_______（介绍活动的过程）.Finally, _______.（总结）_________ benefited us a lot. Not only did it_______, it also _______. What a (n) _______activity!【满分作文模板示例】为了增强学生的安全防范意识，今天上午你校组织了紧急逃生疏散演练活动。假定你是李华，请你给校英文广播站写一篇相关的新闻报道，内容包括：1．活动目的；2．活动流程；3．活动感受。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：疏散演练 evacuation drill_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·全国·高三专题练习）最近外卖风靡校园，很多高中生喜欢点外卖。虽然这种订餐方式使人们的生活更加方便快捷，但同时也存在着不少的弊端。因此，你校上周三举办了一场“远离外卖，健康饮食”的校园活动，假如你是李华，请为校报写一篇新闻报道，要点包括：1.活动的缘由和意义；2.活动的内容和形式；3.你的感想和收获。参考词汇：点外卖order take-out food 塑料包装plastic packages注意:1. 写作词数应为80词左右(文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数) ；2.文中不得出现学校、姓名等与考生本人相关的任何信息。3.语句通顺，意思连贯，可根据提示适当发挥；With the popularity of take-out food in schools, more and more students enjoy the convenience it brings.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·江苏·高三校联考阶段练习）假定你是李华,上周五你校组织了一场关于保护方言的重要性的讲座,请你为校英文报写一篇新闻报道,内容包括:1.讲座时间和参加人员;2.讲座的内容;3.活动意义。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Protecting Dialects_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·全国·高三专题练习）假如你是李华，2月27日你们全班同学参观了市博物馆。请你为校英文报写一篇新闻报道，内容包括：1. 参与人员、 时间；2. 活动内容； 3. 活动反响。注意：1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。A Visit to the City Museum_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·全国·高三专题练习）假定你是李华，你校上周六晚举办了一场露天晚会，以庆祝学校成立60周年。请为你校的英文报写一篇新闻报道。内容包括：1. 晚会目的、时间、地点；2. 晚会过程；3. 观众反响。参考词汇：周年纪念日 anniversary注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·全国·高三专题练习）学校于上周三下午在学校篮球场, 举行了篮球比赛决赛 (the basketball final), 请你为校英语报写一份新闻报道, 内容如下:1. 比赛时间和地点;2. 赛程回顾;3. 赛后反响。注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以根据内容要点适当发挥, 以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·全国·高三专题练习）假设你是李华，上周末你校举办了以“发展中国（Developing China）”为主题的摄影展，请你写一英文新闻报道来介绍这个活动。内容包括：1.展览的时间和地点；2.展览的内容和意义。注意：1. 词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；A photography exhibition on “Developing China”____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·黑龙江齐齐哈尔·统考三模）假定你是李华，上周你校举办了主题为“Live Lightly &. Give Generously”的活动。请你为校英文报写一篇英语新闻稿，报道此次活动。内容包括：1.活动的时间、地点;2.主要活动安排;3.学生们的感受。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Live Lightly & Give Generously_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·河南开封·统考三模）4月3号至7号，你校举办了一场书籍义卖活动。假设你是校英文报的一名记者，请你以“A Charity Book Fair”为题，写一篇新闻报道。内容包括：1．活动的目的;2．活动的时间、地点和内容;3．活动的反响。注意：1．词数100左右;2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3．题目已为你拟好。A Charity Book Fair____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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