2021年杭州中考英语作文大课堂（一）

2021年杭州中考英语作文大课堂

文/孙雪梅

话题一 Personal background (个人情况)

一．与此话题相关单元

7A Unit 1 My name’s Gina.

7A Unit 8 When is your birthday?

7B Unit 9 What does he look like?

9A Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark.

二．本话题的常用表达

1.My brother is a boy of 15 years old.

2.He was born in on…

3.He spends a lot of time helping others.

4.We should learn from him.

5.His stories encourage me to…

6.There is no doubt that he is a successful…

7.It was my first time to…

8.I am good at telling stories.

9.She’s of medium height, and she has long straight hair.

10.He used to like…, but now he is more interested in…

l  参考谚语

1.Where there is a will, there is a way.

2.Well begun is half done.

3.Practice makes perfect.

4.Everyone has his price.

5.You have to believe in yourself. That’s the secret of success.

三．佳句欣赏与模仿

1.    That’s because he was a really good student.

我的妈妈非常强健，那是因为她每天坚持做运动。

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2.    That’s when I decided to change.

我爸爸过去很胖，而且经常生病。医生建议他要多做运动。那时他决定改变自己。

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3.    A. Now she’s not shy anymore and loves singing in front of crowds.

      B. So he was no longer interested in studying and missed classes.

我不再肥胖了。

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4.    It’s very important for parents to be there for their children.

对孩子们来说与父母沟通很重要。

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5.    Her grandparents have had a great influence on Kate.

我的老师对我产生巨大的影响。

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6.    To Li Wen’s surprise, their conversation changed his life.

使我惊奇的是，我的妈妈变得越来越美了。

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7.    There is no doubt that he is a successful teacher.

毫无疑问，我的妈妈是一位伟大的妈妈。

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四．写作范例．

初中阶段令你印象最深刻的是哪位老师？请用英语写一篇题为”The Teacher I will Never Forget” 的作文。

内容包括：1. 教师性格或特长；2. 列举一个事例；3. 对老师的感谢和祝福。

【参考范文】

The Teacher I will Never Forget

How time flies! Three years has passed since I became a middle school student. I had very good memories of my classmates and teachers. The teacher I never forget is Athena, my English teacher. She had a great influence on me.

She is always serious with us. But she is very kind. For example, English used to be my worst subject, and I didn’t like it at all. But she could always make her class interesting and easy. That made me take an interest in learning English. About two years ago, she found I was worried about my poor grammar. She spent her free time helping me do lots of practice in grammar. She was so patient that I was deeply moved by her. With the help of Athena, I wasn’t worried about my English anymore. That’s why my English is always top now.

There is no doubt that Athena is a great teacher! She made my life full of love. And I wish her a healthy and happy life in the future. 

五.实战演练

假设你叫李华，你校正在招募英语角活动主持人，你想应征该职位。请你根据下面表格中的内容提示给负责人刘老师写一封自荐信。

姓名 李华 应征职位 英语角主持人

自荐理由 1.身体健康，精力充沛；2.英语口语好，有过一年在美国学习的经历；3…….            4……

要求：自荐信须包括表格中的内容要点，细节可以适当发挥；字数80词左右，信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mrs. Liu,

I’m from Class 2, Grade 9. And my name’s Li Hua. I’d love to be the host of our school’s English Corner. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

孙雪梅，笔名竹外疏花，中学英语教师，教学笔记和育人心德多篇，诗作若干，闲暇时与山水相逢，偏爱竹、云和天空。

2020.08.06