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1、作文04 天津卷2021年天津中考英语书面表达假如你是某中学学生李华, 最近你班发生了一件令人感动的事情。请根据以下提示, 给你的英国好友 Tom 写一封信, 与他分享你的感动。（1）两周前同学王红伤了左腿。（2）王红上下楼很困难, 但想来。（3）校长知道后, 决定将你班从四楼搬到一楼。（4）你们帮助王红（如买午饭等）。（5）你认为要求：（1）词数： 80100 个。（2）开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。（3）要点齐全, 行文连贯, 可适当发挥。Dear Tom, How are you? I have a moving story to tell you. _Please tell me

2、something interesting about you and your classmates. Yours,Li HuaDear Tom,How are you? I have a moving story to tell you.Wang Hong is my classmate. She hurt her left leg in an accident two weeks ago. It was difficult for Wang Hong to go up and down the stairs, but she wanted to come to school. The h

3、eadmaster decided to move my classroom from the fourth floor to the first floor after he knew it. Wang Hong is very grateful to the headmaster. As her classmates, we should also help her. Some helped her buy lunch, others helped him to clean up. She is happy. I think students should help each other

4、and make progress together.Please tell me something interesting about you and your classmates. Yours,Li Hua【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，要求根据所给的汉语提示，以李华的名义想Tom写一封信谈谈最近你班发生的令人感动的事情，注意要点齐全，写作时要按信的格式来写。2.写作指导：本文应该用第三和第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时；在写作时应承接短文开头，根据汉语提示的内容，叙述王红同学受伤后，校长和同学对她的帮助，并写作自己的感受。在叙述内容时，力求语言正确，内容

5、完整，保证行文连贯。2020年天津中考英语书面表达假如你是学校校报英语专栏的小记者，请根据以下要点写一篇短文，描述你校学生李华的一次难忘经历，并表达你的想法。（1）李华在假期中去甘肃参加了文化交流活动。（2）他向当地学生介绍天津的历史和名胜古迹。（3）他介绍自己的学习方法，还为他们演奏钢琴。（4）他与很多学生成为朋友并保持联系。（5）你认为参考词汇：文化交流活动 cultural exchange activities名胜古迹 places of interest要求：（1）词数：80100个。（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。Li Hua, a stude

6、nt of our school, went to Gansu to _ _Li Hua, a student of our school, went to Gansu to take part in the cultural exchange activities. He introduced the history and places of interest of Tianjin to the local students. He showed his ways of learning and played piano. He made friends with some student

7、s there and kept in touch with them. I think it is an unusual experience. It is necessary for the students to take part in cultural exchange activities. They can not only learn some useful cultural knowledge but also making friends with other people. Its a good way to communicate with other students

8、.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应紧接文章开头继续写作，根据内容提示讲述李华假期的经历并发表自己的看法。2.例文点评：例文主要用第三人称进行写作，主要采用一般过去时态来写作。讲述李华假期的经历叙述完整且条理清晰。3.高分亮点：短语：take part in；kept working；places of interest；played the piano；made friends with；kept in touch with；communicate with。句型：it做形式主语的句子；not onlybut also的句型；and表示并列的句子。2019年天津中考英语书

9、面表达 假如你是晨光中学的学生李华，平时坚持用英语写日记。请根据以下要点，描述你星期三放学乘地铁回家路上看到的事情，并表达自己的想法。(l)一个男孩不舒服，开始呕吐，一位穿着漂亮的女士帮着擦拭地面，男孩表达感谢。(2)地铁到站，有人挤向座位，有人下不去车，有人因此争吵。(3)你认为参考词汇：开始呕吐begin to vomit挤向座位push towards the seat争吵havea quarrel要求：(1)词数：80100个。(2)日记格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥WednesdayWhen I took the underground back

10、home from school, I noticed_. Wednesday When I took the underground back home after school.I noticed a boy who felt not very well and whose face was pale.I was wondering what's wrong with him when he suddenly began to vomit.Seeing this scene, a lady who wore beautiful dress not only gave a helping hand but also cleaned the floor without hesitate.And then the boy expressed gratitude with a low bow.As time passed by, the subway arrived.Someone pushed toward the seat while others can't get off，therefore they had a quarrel an