Writing—有关旅行计划的电子邮件

本单元的写作任务是给朋友写一封介绍旅行计划的电子邮件，电子邮件是互联网时代人们进行书面交流的重要文体，应引起我们的高度重视。

一、增分佳句

1．I have been expecting to travel toBeijing so that I can experience Chinese culture.

我一直想去北京旅游，这样我就能体验中国文化。

2．I'm very excited that the winter vacation is coming. Here is my vacation plan.

寒假快来了，我很兴奋。这是我的假期计划。

3．I was so pleased to hear fromyou and am writing to tell you something about our one－day tour next weekend.

收到你的来信我非常高兴，我写信告诉你关于下周末“一日游”活动的事情。

4．I'm planning to travel to Suzhou, a city called Eastern Venice. 我打算去苏州旅游，一个叫东方威尼斯的城市。

5．May Day is coming, and I am going to travel toShanghai to see its beautiful scenery.

五一就要到了，我打算去上海旅游，看看那里的美景。

6．The reason why we have chosen Hainan Island for our trip is that it has the beautiful blue sea and wonderful golden sands.我们之所以选择来海南岛旅游，是因为它有美丽的碧海和迷人的金色沙滩。

7．I'm planning to go there by train and come back by plane. 我打算坐火车去，然后坐飞机回来。

8．When travelling, take good care of the things you take, such as your ID card, passport, money and other valuable things. 在旅途中，请妥善保管好随身携带的物品，如身份证、护照、现金等贵重物品。

9．I will book a hotel online in advance.

我将在网上提前预订旅馆。

10．I'm sure this trip will broaden my view. By experiencing a different culture I can have a better understanding of our country. 我相信这次旅行会开阔我的视野。通过体验不同的文化，我可以更好地了解我们的国家。

11．I hope I can have a perfect holiday here and by getting close to nature, I can get relaxed and refreshed.

我希望我能在这里度过一个完美的假期，通过亲近大自然，我可以得到放松和恢复。

12．Can you offer me some advice and recommend some tourist attractions?

你能给我一些建议并推荐一些旅游景点吗？

【写作要求】

假设你是王明，寒假即将来临，你打算和家人去北京游览长城。请你给你的好友李华写一封e-mail, 分享你的出行计划。

要点：

1.对长城的认识；

2．其他旅游目的地——故宫和颐和园及交通方式；

3．希望。

注意：

1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2．词数80左右。

故宫：the Imperial Palace; 颐和园：the Summer Palace

【五步成文】

第一步：审题谋篇

第二步：推敲词汇

1．__pay a visit to__参观

2．__a great wonder__一个大的奇迹

3．__create__创造

4．__have a long history__有悠久的历史

5．__tourist attraction__旅游景点

6．__attract__吸引

7．__all over the world__　　全世界

8．__hear from__收到来信

第三步：由词扩句

1．我和我的父母计划去看长城。

__My parents and I are planning to see the Great Wall.__

2．长城有着悠久的历史。它是中国古代人民创造的一个伟大奇迹。

The Great Wall __has a long history. It is a great wonder created by the ancient Chinese people__.

3．长城已经成为中国著名的景点之一。

The Great Wall __has become one of famous tourist attractions in China__.

4．长城每年吸引大量来自世界各地的游客。

The Great Wall __attracts a large number of visitors from all over the world each year__.

5．我们还计划参观北京的其他地方，如故宫、颐和园。

We're also __planning to visit other places in Beijing, such as the Imperial Palace, the Summer Palace__.

6．我们将乘火车去那里。

__We're taking the train to go there.__

第四步：句式升级

1．把句2合并升级为名词短语作同位语的高级句式

__The Great Wall, a great wonder created by the ancient Chinese people, has a long history.__

2．把句3句4合并升级为v－ing作状语

__The Great Wall has become one of famous tourist attractions in China, attracting a large number of visitors from all over the world each year.__

第五步：连句成篇

Dear Li Hua,

I'm glad to tell you my parents and I are planning to pay a visit to the Great Wall.

The Great Wall, a great wonder created by the ancient Chinese people, has a long history. Now it has become one of famous tourist attractions in China, attracting a large number of visitors from all over the world each year. Besides, we're also planning to visit other places in Beijing, such as the Imperial Palace, the Summer Palace. We're taking the train to go there.

Do you have any plans for the coming holiday? Hope to hear from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

作文练习

假定你是Jack，五月份打算来中国旅行，请你给你的中国笔友李华写封信，要点如下：

1．你的旅行计划：北京→泰山→杭州；

2．征求他的建议并询问他是否愿意充当你的导游。

注意：

1.词数80左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：

1.the Forbidden City紫禁城

2．Mount Tai泰山

【参考范文】

Dear Li Hua，

I'm glad to tell you that I'm going to visit China in May. My arrangements are as follows：

First, I am planning to visit Beijing, the capital of China, where I will pay a visit to the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and some beautiful parks. Then I intend to climb the Mount Tai to see the sunrise. After that, I am going to Hangzhou, a beautiful city which is famous for West Lake.

What do you think of my travel plan? And do I have an honour to invite you as my guide? Hope to hear from you.

Yours，

Jack