2024年考研英语一真题大小作文（例文+分析）

Section III Writing

Part A

Read the following email from a student. Write a reply.

Dear Li Ming

I’ve got a class assignment to make an oral report on an ancient Chinese scientist. I am not sure how to prepare for it. Could you give me some advice? Thanks for your help.

Yours, Paul

Write your letter in no less than 100 words.

Don’t sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.

情境概括：Paul 向李明请求李明给自己一些关于口头报告中国科学家的课堂作业的建议, 因为自己不知道怎么准备，要求李明给Paul写一封不少于100个字的回信。不要在信的末尾签上你自己的名字。

分析：题目出法新颖，但本质就是给同学提建议，可采用非正式文体，文章中有3-5词缩略，2-3个祈使句等。

第一段： 非常高兴你来向我寻求建议，听到你要做关于中国古代科学家的报告了，下面是我的想法，欢迎随时和我沟通。

第二段：我心里闪现了无数个科学家， 但是有一位，我想你也熟悉，那就是鲁班。我们可以由风靡中国的手游王者荣耀里的角色鲁班引入，我相信一开始就会吸引大家兴趣；其次，详细介绍鲁班的生活的朝代和做出的成就，这些你可以在维基百科上查到。最后，表达自己对这位科学家的敬重，这是我们当代大学生都应该学习的。(根据字数，100-110就可以了，多了不要写去掉，考场尤其注重时间和正确率，言多必失)

第三段：我相信你会圆满完成报告，期待你的好消息。

Dear Paul,

I’m very pleased that you have come to seek advice on your oral report on ancient Chinese scientists from me. Below are my thoughts. Feel free to communicate with me anytime.

Actually, a lot of scientists pop in my mind, however, Lu Ban, the Chinese master carpenter is the one I have to recommend. How can we do a oral report about him? Firstly, introduce the character Lu Ban from the popular mobile game King of Glory in China, which will definitely attract everyone’s interest . Secondly, describe detailed information of Lu Ban, such as his dynasty, achievements. I’m sure you can find that on Wikipedia.

I believe you will successfully complete the report and I’m looking forward to your good news.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

Part B

情境概括：一幅图是公园里的健身区得到了小区居民的厚爱。一个图标是家门口公园数量变化，我们要分析这两幅图之间的关系，从图表中可以看出，从2020到2022年，公园数量从406增加到670，逐年升高，这给居民带来巨大的受益，居民可以就近锻炼身体，提升生活幸福感。

分析：这是大纲改革之后终于出现新的考试模式，只是没想到是图表和图画结合在一起，我们只需要调整第一段的描述即可。第二三段保持正常。

第一段：描述图表+图画

One can see that the number of park has spiked up from 406 in 2020 to 670 in 2022 in bar chart, which naturally leads to the emergence of image that small group of young people run pass the Fitness Area in park. Of course, it is not be ignored that a local resident is satisfied with the construction of Park.

第二段：重点解释为什么形成此现象？这种现象在2-3线城市越来越普遍。 第一：随着生态环保宜居概念的普及，政府或公共团体越来越重视通过建设公园，（供公众游览，观赏，休息，锻炼身体的场所）打造适宜人们生活的城市。  第二，体育活动设施是公园重要组成部分，因离家近，方便年轻人，老年人等独自或组团运动，深受居民欢迎。

So, what factors can be responsible for the above phenomenon? Residents in second, or third-tier cities are not strange to this. Firstly, the concept of livable city finds its way into life and a goal for urban development is established. Thus, government or public organizations pay more attention to building park which offers the public rest, sight-seeing,and exercise. Secondly,  fitness area, where young and old do their exercises by individuals or in groups, as a huge part of park, has gained its popularity among local residents.

第三段：预测趋势，公园作为城市生活必不可缺的一部分，大城市中越来越多的人能够享受到绿地空间，珍惜这项体验。

Predictably, local residents’ happiness will be enhanced by a lot of benefits from park. And I am convinced that building more parks are beneficial for both individuals and society.